Seeing as this is your fisrt review, you did a pretty good job. Though, by your scoring system, it looks like the game Should have been a 9/10. A 10/10 is given to only perfect games and acording to your review it is not quite perfect.(Though this is your review, you could give 10/10 to everything and still say the game's worth a 5/10.)
ANother thing. From what your review says this game should have been a 9/10, not a 10/10 which still isn't bad at all. To be honest Im against the scoring system in games because it means that a review will go unseen or unread for the most part. Im more for a buy, rent, or skip function or no scoring of any kind. eh oh well, what are ya gonna do?
I will say this, you did a good job telling everyone what was good about thegame and what was bad.
In the end , though, it's not about what i say, it's about YOUR opinion, and I think you drove your point across. Good job, keep up the work.