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Custom Enemies 2 (Collab with LinkGamer715) By: SuperSprite56
Enemiiiiiiiiiiiiies.
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[O] Created: Nov 20 2019, 6:50 PM
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mariofan230
Nov 22 2019, 3:09 AM
Unfortunately, none of these enemies (Except the Freezie-Boo, Watoboo, Poiso-Boo and Invisiboo) look very appealing to me, this could definitely use work because of these reasons:
1. Co-Cosapain is just a simple recolor from Yoshi's island. The tree is also a recolor from SMB3. And I believe the coconut looks like the sphere on the goal pole from SMB1.
2. Small Fry is a simple recolor from SMAS SMB3's Firesnake sprite.
3. Broozer looks too small. I'd make him have 32x32 pixels than 16x16. However the punching style looks really good, but the squishing sprites are poorly made from the first two (And I mean it with how the top of his head just has a curve). Flattening broozer (Polishing the sprites are recommended) is a good idea for this. When broozer punches I would make him turn more as he goes.
4. "I'm Lazy"
That honestly doesn't mean that you can just leave the kritter sprites like that and post it. If you're going to include "Kritter" sprites in this I would at least put more effort and make it look good (The sunglasses are facing too forward, Legs can be bent a little more to the front and the arm behind it's chest could be pushed a bit behind). If you're lazy you can come back to it when you think it's time and add what is too complicated to do after the sheet is posted, you can try again, but what is the point of leaving sprites lazy if it is going to result in people not using them?
5. I would say that the nabbit sprites are slightly improved over your last one, but the big issue with these now is these are shorter. Previously you made nabbit taller and now it's smaller, or is it not a regular nabbit... small nabbit? If you were trying to make normal nabbit then these need to be taller. In SMM SMW style most enemies that are Bowser Jr's size are limited to 32x32 pixels. Try imitating nabbit to that size and see how it goes. Since it is the only enemy in this sheet that just says bonus above it I cannot tell if you're going for a small variant of nabbit or a regular nabbit.

The recolor Lava bubble and Boos sprites are good but everything else needs work. Next time I would avoid posting lazy sprites and try again when you need too.
 
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SuperSprite56
Nov 22 2019, 3:13 PM
Quote (mariofan230 on Nov 21 2019, 11:09 PM)
Unfortunately, none of these enemies (Except the Freezie-Boo, Watoboo, Poiso-Boo and Invisiboo) look very appealing to me, this could definitely use work because of these reasons:
1. Co-Cosapain is just a simple recolor from Yoshi's island. The tree is also a recolor from SMB3. And I believe the coconut looks like the sphere on the goal pole from SMB1.
2. Small Fry is a simple recolor from SMAS SMB3's Firesnake sprite.
3. Broozer looks too small. I'd make him have 32x32 pixels than 16x16. However the punching style looks really good, but the squishing sprites are poorly made from the first two (And I mean it with how the top of his head just has a curve). Flattening broozer (Polishing the sprites are recommended) is a good idea for this. When broozer punches I would make him turn more as he goes.
4. "I'm Lazy"
That honestly doesn't mean that you can just leave the kritter sprites like that and post it. If you're going to include "Kritter" sprites in this I would at least put more effort and make it look good (The sunglasses are facing too forward, Legs can be bent a little more to the front and the arm behind it's chest could be pushed a bit behind). If you're lazy you can come back to it when you think it's time and add what is too complicated to do after the sheet is posted, you can try again, but what is the point of leaving sprites lazy if it is going to result in people not using them?
5. I would say that the nabbit sprites are slightly improved over your last one, but the big issue with these now is these are shorter. Previously you made nabbit taller and now it's smaller, or is it not a regular nabbit... small nabbit? If you were trying to make normal nabbit then these need to be taller. In SMM SMW style most enemies that are Bowser Jr's size are limited to 32x32 pixels. Try imitating nabbit to that size and see how it goes. Since it is the only enemy in this sheet that just says bonus above it I cannot tell if you're going for a small variant of nabbit or a regular nabbit.

The recolor Lava bubble and Boos sprites are good but everything else needs work. Next time I would avoid posting lazy sprites and try again when you need too.

1/2. I never look at YI Sprites so I didn't know it was just a recolor, the tree, I can see that now. I didn't see that firesnake sheet so I didn't know. LG715 didn't tell me this stuff.
3. Okay, sorry. I didn't think he was toos mall. and thanks for letting me know. Also, I'll try to flatten instead when he's squished,
4. I was 'lazy' because I was coming back to this sheet after 4-5 months, I started this with LG715 in june. I was just starting back on this sheet, they are just traces of the DKC sprites with slight edits here and there.
5. It's regular nabbit, I'll try doing that Bowser Jr. Thing.

Alright I'll improve on my stuff. But first I'm going to try to fix up my Broodal sprites.
 
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LinkGamer715
Nov 25 2019, 9:20 PM
I said don't post it, it needs more work.
 
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Evan.F
Nov 25 2019, 10:29 PM
I can make a better broozer sprite in minutes
https://forum.stabyourself.net...=135831#p135831

I'll add animations tomorrow.
 
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mariofan230
Nov 25 2019, 10:48 PM
Quote (Evan.F on Nov 25 2019, 10:29 PM)
I can make a better broozer sprite in minutes
[url=https://forum.stabyourself.net...=135831#p135831]https://forum.stabyourself.net...=135831#p135831[/url]

I'll add animations tomorrow.

It does look improved, but I actually have to say that I think there is still some things that the sprite can be more improved on. It should be a little bigger because I've checked and he his smaller than the SMW Bowser.Jr sprite, the teeth looks like a key from Bob-ombs, the shading in his hip looks like a ghost tail, the back of his right arm has a strange line that makes it look like an eye, speaking of which his eyes are a bit too high and should the outlines of his eyes be removed and lastly the red on the boxing gloves are too dark.
 
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